“Well done, Lieutenant. You’ve accomplished in a week what that guard lieutenant-What’s his name? Menna?-
has been unable to do in more months than I can guess.”
“Yes, sir. Now all we have to do is snare them.”
“You can leave that to me.” Maiherperi snapped his fingers and beckoned. A young officer who had been talking with several scribes at the back of the room hastened to the dais. The commander sent him off to summon the head of the garrison at Waset. “Or, rather, to my colleague Commander Ahmose. Within the hour he can have soldiers across the river watching the farm and send out couriers to have the boat stopped should Pairi and Humay travel beyond the borders of this province. At first light tomorrow he’ll have men on the river searching for their boat nearer to home.”
Bak nodded, well satisfied. He had hurried directly to Waset after leaving the farm of Pairi and Humay, thinking to relate his tale to a man with far more authority than he. Unable to reach Amonked, he had come to the commander. The decision had been a good one. Maiherperi was a man who wasted no time in setting in motion what had to be done.
“As I said before, sir, they may no longer be among the living.”
“I’ll tell Ahmose. Never fear; they’ll be found whether alive or dead.” The commander waved away a ribbon of smoke wafting across the dais from a torch mounted on the wall. “Does Amonked know of your success?”
“No, sir. I thought to bring him with me to see you, but he was away from his home, summoned by our sovereign to the royal house. Something to do with Senenmut’s inspection tomorrow of Djeser Djeseru.”
“Ah, yes. The matter of providing additional guards. I suppose I should’ve gone to the royal house, too, but I’ve no patience with discussing over and over again a problem that’s been resolved. The guards will be provided and they’ll be on the alert for trouble. If Senenmut insists on going. And knowing him, he will.”
Maiherperi had to be very secure in his position, Bak thought, to take a summons from their sovereign so lightly.
The commander waved his hand again, breaking up the smoke. A guard grabbed a torch mounted beside the door, hastened across the room, and substituted the one for the other.
“Have you told that guard officer-Menna-that you’ve resolved his problem for him?”
“No, sir.” Bak hesitated, added, “I’d rather he didn’t know yet.”
Maiherperi gave him a sharp look. “Why not?”
Bak was not sure what he should say. He did not want to lay blame where no blame was due. “He was very resentful when first I came to Waset. His attitude has since improved and he’s readily accepted my recent suggestions, but he won’t like the fact that I’ve achieved what he has toiled so long and hard to accomplish. And now, instead of going to him and sharing the success, the glory, I’ve come straight to you.”
“He has no one to blame but himself.” Maiherperi frowned at the scribes, whose voices had risen in a mild squabble. “This so-called malign spirit. . Do you have any idea who the vile creature might be?”
“If Pairi and Humay are found alive, they can be made to point a finger. If not. .” Bak hesitated, unwilling to commit 232
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himself, but finally said, “I could guess, sir, but I wish to be more certain before I name him.”
Not long after daybreak the following morning, Bak strode into the courtyard at the hall of records. There he found Hori and Kaemwaset seated on woven reed mats beneath a portico, dipping chunks of fresh, warm bread into a bowl of duck stew resting on a hot brazier. To Bak, who had spent the night in the garrison and shared with the duty officers a morning meal of hard day-old bread and cold fish stew, the mingled smells of yeast and duck were as the food of the gods. Fortunately, they had enough for three, and the respite allowed him to tell them of his previous day’s successes.
After nearly emptying the bowl, they cleaned their hands with natron and a damp cloth so they would not damage the aged documents they would be handling. No sooner had they turned away from the remains of their meal than a yellow cat and five kittens crept out from beneath a bush to lick the bowl clean. Kaemwaset lifted a scroll from a shallow basket containing a dozen or so others. The seals were broken and the strings that had once bound them had in many cases rotted away.
Unrolling the scroll, the priest held it out for Bak to look at. “You see what we must contend with.” The papyrus had turned brownish with age, was torn, riddled with holes, and dotted with splotches large and small. “This document is no worse than many others we found,” he added, tapping the basket with a fingernail.
Bak took the musty-smelling scroll from the priest and, holding the brittle papyrus carefully, studied the uppermost lines of symbols. “Not easy to read.”
“No, sir. And errors can creep in through misunderstanding of the partial lines we can read.”
“Did a plan survive of Nebhepetre Montuhotep’s temple?”
“You should see it, sir!” Hori plucked a scroll from the basket. “It doesn’t look at all like the ruined temple. You wouldn’t know it’s the same building.”
Bak had hoped for more but was not surprised. “The mansion of the lord Amon in Waset has been altered many times through many generations. Even the initial plan of Djeser Djeseru has been changed during the few years since construction began. Can we expect less from a provincial king who pulled together a fragmented land and made it into a single grand whole?”
“He would’ve wanted better for himself as his power increased,” Hori agreed.
Taking the scroll from the young scribe, Kaemwaset unrolled it across his lap.
Laying aside the document he held, Bak bent close to look at the sadly decayed papyrus, whistled. “How certain are you that this was planned for Nebhepetre Montuhotep?”
“Some doubt arises,” the priest admitted. “It contains the name of Montuhotep and was found among the other scrolls we know were prepared during Nebhepetre Montuhotep’s reign. We must face the fact that it could’ve been drawn during the reign of a different Montuhotep-the name is slightly different-and placed with the wrong documents at a later time.”
“But you don’t think so.”
“Nebhepetre Montuhotep ruled for some years and he’d have wanted to display his expanding authority. I’d be less surprised to find his temple altered than a few others I’ve seen.”
Bak stared at the plan, so different from the temple he, Hori, and Kasaya had so painstakingly searched days before. “Have you finished with the archives? Or do you have more old records to go through?”
“We’ve one more section,” Kaemwaset said, “another fifty or so storage pots that have no labels denoting their contents. I suspect they contain documents thrown asunder during the years of chaos and gathered together later in too much haste to store and label properly. Between the two of us, it’ll take much of the day to go through them all, reading a sufficient amount of each document to be certain it is or isn’t what we seek.”
Kneeling to scratch the mother cat’s head, Bak scowled at the ancient plan spread across the priest’s legs. He was not sure how helpful it would be, but it was all they had and might be all they would ever find. “Get a fresh scroll, Hori. I wish you to take time out from your search to redraw this plan. Draw as much as you can clearly see in black ink, then with Kaemwaset’s help, fill in the missing or stained places with red ink. Maybe we can discover exactly what this is.”
The priest smiled his appreciation. “A good idea, sir. If this is an early version of Nebhepetre Montuhotep’s temple, a new and complete drawing might well be worth the effort.”
“Keep a close eye on Hori.” Rising to his feet, Bak grinned at the youth, letting him know he was teasing, at least partially so. “We spent many hours searching that temple and he knows it well. He must not add parts to the new plan that fit closer to his memory than does this aging papyrus.”
“Welcome, Lieutenant. Amonked has told me of you.”
Mai, the harbormaster, a stout man with a fringe of curly white hair that surely tickled the back of his neck, ushered Bak into the room he used as his office. “He speaks highly of you, and with good reason if all he says is true.”
“He’s probably exaggerating,” Bak said, smiling.
“I’ve known him for years and I’ve never known him to embellish a tale.” Mai walked to a large rectangular opening in the outer wall and looked out upon the harbor of Waset, with its many ships moored along the river’s edge and the bustling market where townsmen exchanged local products for the exotic objects brought by seamen from faraway ports. The opening reminded Bak of the window of appearances in the royal house, which served as a stage upon which their sovereign appeared before her subjects. “Did he ever tell you he once dreamed of sailing a large and imposing seagoing ship? One that would ply the waters of the Great Green Sea to Amurru, Keftiu, the southern shores of-” He stopped abruptly, laughed. “Suffice it to say, he’s traveled no farther than the Belly of Stones.”
“I stood with him on the battlements of the fortress of Semna, looking down upon the border between Wawat and Kush. I could see in his heart the wish to follow the river to its end.”
“So he told me.” Mai swung away from the window, motioned Bak onto a stool, and sat on a low chair that allowed him to look out at the harbor while they talked. “To what do I owe your visit, Lieutenant?”
“I’ve come to clarify something Amonked told me. Something I thought nothing of at the time.”
“I assume this involves the ancient jewelry my inspector found?”
“Yes, sir.” A harsh yell drew Bak’s eyes to the street below, where a spirited pair of chariot horses had knocked a woolly fleece from a merchant’s shoulder and trampled it.
The charioteer flung what looked like a garrison grain token at the man and drove on. “He said yesterday, when he informed me of your discovery, that you’d grown very excited when he told you, three days earlier, of the jar I found in Buhen with jewelry inside. Especially when he described the sketch around the neck, a necklace with a pendant bee.”
“That surprises you? It shouldn’t. After months of fruitless searching here and there and everywhere, we had something specific to look for. Who would’ve thought of looking inside a honey jar? None of my inspectors. Nor I, for that matter.”
“Lieutenant Menna didn’t come to you seven or eight days ago, when I told him of the sketch?”
“He did not.” Mai’s eyes narrowed. “You told him when?”
“A few hours after I arrived in Waset. He vowed he’d tell you right away.”
“Well, he didn’t.” Mai, obviously irritated, stared out the window at the many vessels moored there. The beat of a drum and the chant of the oarsmen announced the arrival of a cargo ship whose deck was divided into stalls filled with reddish long-horned cattle. Bak doubted the harbormaster saw the ship or its contents. “Menna seems a good-hearted soul, Lieutenant, rather touchy about what he perceives as the status of his assignment, but he’s not a man one can depend on.”
“Is he incompetent, sir? Or something else?”
Mai’s eyes darted from the window to Bak, his expression censorious, directed not to his visitor but to the man about whom he spoke. “I’ve heard he seldom visits the cemeteries, that he spends more time writing reports than supervising the men who guard the dwelling places of the dead.” His mouth tightened to a thin, critical line. “I’ve never seen him with a speck of dust on his kilt or sandals, and he always looks as if he’s fresh from his bath. When I visit my venerable ancestors during the Beautiful Festival of the Valley, staying on the paths as much as possible, I return to my home dripping with sweat and with myself and my clothing stained brown by dust.”
“I’ve felt he was lax in his duty, but tried to believe he had sergeants he could trust. As I trust mine.”
“Do you leave your sergeants alone day after day, letting them do what they will with no word from you, no report from them?”
Bak smiled. “No, sir.”
The smile Mai returned was stingy, weakened by censure.
“Don’t get me wrong, Lieutenant. I like him. However, I can’t condone a man’s failure to oversee the men responsible to him.”
Bak liked this gruff, outspoken man. They saw their duty much the same. “How well do you know him?”
“Not personally. Our paths seldom cross. Only when my inspectors recover an object stolen from the dead. Also, if I have the time, I drop in to see him when I visit my chief inspector, who’s housed in the same building.”
“Where’s Menna from, do you know?” Bak spoke casually, as if giving no special weight to the question.
He either failed in his purpose or Mai’s thoughts were keeping pace with his, for the harbormaster gave him a long, thoughtful look. “His forebears were men of the river, as were mine, so that question I can answer. He was born in Iunyt, the son of a fisherman who died when he was three or four years of age. His mother was daughter to a ferryman who dwelt across the river. Upon the death of her husband, she returned to her family home in western Waset, bringing the child with her.”
Bak’s heart skipped a beat. The Lates fish was held sacred in Iunyt. “So he knows western Waset well, and the people who dwell there.”
“Better than most, I’d say.”
Bak drew in a breath, then released it with a whoosh.
Though he had no proof, the tiny suspicion in his heart was rapidly turning into a conviction. “Would that I’d come to see you when first I came to Waset. Information flows from you as water from a spring, and each word more worthy than gold.”
“You must’ve asked the right questions,” Mai said, openly curious.
“As harbormaster, you must know or at least have met Pairi and Humay, two brothers who sail a fishing boat out of western Waset.”
Mai must have detected the change from suspicion to certainty, for he turned away from the window, focusing his attention on his visitor. “Broad, strong men, one most notable for a squarish head and flat face.”
“Are they in any way related to Menna?”
“Not that I’ve heard.” Mai tapped his fingers on his thigh, trying to remember. “Their father was a farmer, I’ve been told, and their uncle a fisherman. They were apprenticed to him as youths, and when he died, they inherited his boat.”
“Have you ever seen Menna with them?” Bak asked, not quite ready to reveal his thoughts.
“Not that I recall.”
Bak was willing to bet that if the three men had been together at the harbor, Mai would remember. “Have you ever seen the brothers with any of Menna’s guards? His sergeants?”
“I fear you’ve lost me, Lieutenant. I know the Medjays assigned to guard the harbor, and I’d recognize a palace guard by his dress and weapons and shield. Other than those two units, I can’t tell one from another.”
“One of Menna’s men, a sergeant, was found dead yesterday at Djeser Djeseru. He’d been slain, struck down from behind, and a small landslide set off to make his death look accidental. I thought before we found him that he’d robbed the tomb in which I saw the jewelry your inspector found in the honey jar. I erred. Another man, the one we call the malign spirit, took the jewelry and slew the guard who helped him take it.” Bak went on to describe Imen.
“Several men answer to that description, so I can’t be sure, but I think I’ve seen him here at the harbor. Not with Menna, but talking to Pairi and Humay.”
Satisfaction erupted within Bak’s heart. The various trails he had been following had converged into one.
Mai eyed him curiously. “What are you thinking, Lieutenant?”
“I think Menna might well be the man we’ve been calling the malign spirit, his goal to steal ancient jewelry from a tomb or tombs in the valley where Djeser Djeseru is being built.”
“Menna?” The harbormaster chuckled. “He’s negligent, lazy, never follows through on a task. Does that sound like your malign spirit?”
“He could be a man of two faces. On the surface, a quiet, perfectly groomed, and rather incompetent guard officer.
Beneath the skin, a cold-blooded and vicious slayer of innocent men, one whose sole purpose is to safely rob the dead.”
Mai laughed so hard tears flowed from his eyes. “Your imagination does you credit, young man, but I fear you must look elsewhere for your malign spirit. Menna simply doesn’t have the will or competence to pursue a task as dangerous and difficult as robbing tombs.”
With Mai’s laughter ringing in his ears, Bak hurried along the busy streets to Menna’s office. The harbormaster’s certainty that the guard officer was incapable of carrying out a long-term, complicated, and difficult task had seriously placed in question his suspicion. For one thing, Mai’s impressions of Menna were much in line with his own over the past few days.
If not Menna, then who could the malign spirit be? More than one man, he had already concluded. The fishermen, certainly. They would be as likely to wear amulets of the Lates fish as a man from Iunyt. They had had Imen’s help and that of at least one other man. One who could walk unimpeded and unnoticed across the sands of Djeser Djeseru, one who knew the building site well.
No man would have had more freedom or knew the site better than Montu, and Bak had found the shard with the sketch of the bee in the architect’s office. True, Montu had expressed anger when the workman Ahotep had died while toiling at the southern retaining wall, but what better way to draw attention to an accident that was not in fact an accident than to point it out?
But Montu had been slain. Perhaps there had been a falling out of thieves and the fishermen had taken his life.
The architect would have been the leader, the one who thought and planned for the gang. Maybe he had demanded too large a portion of the spoils, thinking himself indispensi-ble. Maybe the others had disagreed. After many months of working with him, they would know exactly what to do and how to go about it, with or without him.
Lieutenant Menna was not in his office. He had gone to the garrison, a young scribe said, to arrange for a replacement for Imen. While there, Bak felt sure he would hear of the search for Pairi and Humay. If he was the vile criminal, the news might well set him to flight. Or would it? Flight would be an admission of guilt. If he thought the fishermen free and clear-or dead-would he turn his back on his life in Waset unnecessarily? Would he want to look guilty before he was certain he had been identified as the malign spirit?
Bak was torn. He wanted to go to the garrison, to question Menna right away, to satisfy himself of the officer’s guilt or innocence. But dare he? The fishermen might not be dead.
No matter who their leader, the deceased Montu or the living Menna, they could be hiding somewhere near Djeser Djeseru, planning a spectacular accident with Senenmut as a witness or, far worse, a victim. He might still have time to stop it-if it was not already too late. The barque of the lord Re had climbed halfway up the morning sky, and the inspection should be well on its way. Worse, to Bak’s way of thinking, was the certainty that Amonked, escorting Senenmut around Djeser Djeseru, was as much at risk as Maatkare Hatshepsut’s favorite.
He must hurry to Djeser Djeseru. But before he crossed the river, he must share what he knew with Maiherperi. Only the most foolhardy of men would keep to himself knowledge so important. Of equal importance was the need to discover the identity of the man he had been calling the malign spirit, and the fastest way was to draw Menna to Djeser Djeseru. How could he do so? With garrison troops searching for the fishermen, the officer was bound to be wary-if indeed he was the malign spirit-but hopefully not so suspicious he could not be soothed.
What would put at ease a guilty man as well as one who was innocent? After a few moment’s thought, Bak borrowed brush and ink from the young scribe and wrote a brief note: I think I know who’s been causing the accidents at Djeser Djeseru. If you join me there at mid-afternoon, Senenmut’s inspection should be completed and we can snare him then.
He handed the note to the scribe. “I wish you to take this message to Lieutenant Menna. I must go to the hall of records, so deliver his response to me there. Report to me also if you fail to find him.”
If nothing else, the note’s enigmatic nature should pique Menna’s curiosity.
“They’ve not yet crossed the river,” Maiherperi said.
“Senenmut decided to use the morning hours to inspect the repairs being made at the mansion of the lord Amon here in Waset.”
“I thank the gods!”
The guard at the door, alerted by the exclamation whose words he had evidently not heard, took a quick step forward, poised to act. The commander signaled that all was well, sending him back to his post. “Your optimism is unfounded, Lieutenant. When he’s finished here, he plans to move on to Djeser Djeseru.”
Bak slumped onto a stool unbidden. “It’s not too late to stop him.”
Maiherperi made a sour face. “Amonked tried to convince him he must not inspect Djeser Djeseru today-or until the malign spirit is snared. He refused to listen, saying no one would dare injure him. When I seconded Amonked’s plea, he suggested we’ve something to hide, a wall that collapsed from shoddy construction perhaps or. .” He paused, smiled with little humor. “The list is endless, it seems.”
Bak muttered a curse. “You must somehow stop him, sir.”
The commander raised his hands, palms forward. “No man can stop Senenmut when he sets his heart on an action.
After all, he’s Overseer of Overseers of All the Works of the King.” A wry note crept into his voice. “He takes the task seriously.”
“If he witnesses a terrible accident, if he’s hurt or killed by chance or by design. .” Bak could go no further. The thought was too appalling.
“He’s blind to the risk. To his way of thinking, spirits malign or benevolent act at random, with no purpose. When we pointed out that this spirit is a man, he remained unmoved, thinking himself safe because no ordinary individual would dare touch a man so close to our sovereign.”
Bak stood up. “I fear not only for Senenmut, sir, but for Amonked as well.”
Maiherperi stepped down from the dais and laid a sympathetic hand on the younger officer’s shoulder. “No more than I, Lieutenant. No more than I.”
“Here it is, sir, the new plan we drew.” Hori, looking as proud as a father showing off his firstborn son, handed the new-made scroll to Bak. “If this was an early temple built by Nebhepetre Montuhotep, I’m not surprised he changed it. It wouldn’t have been half as imposing as the temple he completed.”
Kaemwaset hovered close, as pleased with the drawing as Hori. “The plan makes no mention of the setting in which the temple was built. If it was built. It’s smaller than the ruined building and could easily have been leveled and the new structure built over it.”
Bak knelt beside the pair and unrolled the scroll. The drawing, while a long way from being a work of art, was exactly what he wanted. He prayed it would also be what he needed. “Excellent. Let’s hope I can use this to good advantage.”
Even with the blank spaces filled in, the plan in no way resembled the temple he and his men had explored cubit by cubit. The entrance to the king’s tomb was some distance in front of the raised platform rather than at the back, as at present. The platform on the old plan, shorter in width and length and not as high, was surmounted by a small memorial temple rather than the solid structure and enclosed main court surrounded by a colonnade that lay in ruins on the existing platform. The colonnade court, columned hall, and sanctuary of the present structure were not shown at all. Six small chapels or shrines lined the rear edge of the smaller platform.
“Have you found anything else of interest?” he asked, rolling up the plan.
Kaemwaset pointed to a stained scroll lying on top of those in the basket. “One of the old documents we found makes mention of the sepulcher of a royal spouse named Neferu. It’s somewhere east of the new temple, at the base of the slope beneath the northern cliff.”
“In the path of the northern retaining wall at Djeser Djeseru?”
“Possibly. The exact location isn’t clear.” The priest offered Bak a rolled scroll made of fresh white papyrus. “The document was very fragile, so I copied it, filling in the missing or unclear symbols in red ink, as Hori filled in the plan.”
“Good.” Bak stood up, granted each a quick smile of thanks. “I can take it and the plan with me and study them on the ferry while I cross the river.”
The pair glanced at each other, visibly disappointed, no doubt feeling he was not giving their considerable effort the attention it deserved.
“Lieutenant Bak.” The young scribe he had talked with at Menna’s office approached across the courtyard. “I’ve delivered your message, sir, and the officer said he’d meet you as you asked him to.”
“How did he receive the message?”
“He was puzzled, sir, very puzzled.”
Bak nodded, not at all surprised. Whether Menna would have second thoughts and not appear as promised was an open question. Even at the best of times he was not dependable. With Senenmut’s inspection delayed, giving him more time, perhaps he should. . “Where is he now? Still at the garrison?”
“No, sir, I caught him as he was leaving. I think he was looking for a boat to carry him across the river.”
Bak thanked the scribe and sent him on his way. Had Menna crossed the river on an ordinary errand, or in an attempt to escape? Or to do further damage? He prayed fervently to the lord Amon that he had not missed the only opportunity he might have had to lay hands on the guilty man.
“I must go right away to Djeser Djeseru. Senenmut has delayed his inspection until after midday, and I must do all I can to ensure his safety while he’s there.”
“Do you think Neferu’s tomb is the one the malign spirit is seeking?” Hori asked, trying to hide his distress.
“It’s impossible to say. We’ve no idea how many wives and daughters Nebhepetre Montuhotep had.” Noting the gloom on both their faces, Bak realized he could not simply walk away from them after they had searched the archives with such diligence. “The two of you must come with me. If Lieutenant Menna turns up at Djeser Djeseru as I hope, you’ve every right to be there when I question him. While we await him, we can search out the tomb he’s looking for.”
Hori gaped.
Kaemwaset looked perplexed. “Lieutenant Menna?”
Bak realized they were ignorant of all he had learned since last he had seen them. “Lieutenant Menna may be the malign spirit. If he proves to be innocent, I fear we must look closer at a dead man: Montu.”
“Menna?” Kaemwaset shook his head in denial. “He’s the guard officer, a man above reproach.”
“Come. I’ll explain on the way.”
Kaemwaset looked as sober as Bak had ever seen him.
“The workmen and artisans must not be given the smallest hint of what you’re thinking. If they convince themselves Menna is the one who’s brought about so much injury and death, they’ll tear him apart.”